Review on Toastmasters Project (2): How to find your passion

I did my Toastmasters Project 2 (Organize your speech) for CC on 1st Nov 2016 and here are the feedback given.

Speech Value:

5/5: Relevant and meaningful

Preparations:

4/5: Relevant quotations and rhetorical questions used

Organization:

Clear opening, body and conclusion

Opening:

4/5

Body:

4/5

Conclusion:

4/5

Transitions:

3/5: Transitions are not clearly evident

What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?

  • Reorganize the content and end it with a call for action
  • Reduce body language/movement: pacing up and down

What did you like about the presentation?

It is an authentic, personal and inspiring speech. Great!

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